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Jokulsa Beach, Iceland
« on: August 26, 2013, 06:10:50 PM »

Any comments/critique welcomed. TIA Paul
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Re: Jokulsa Beach, Iceland
« Reply #1 on: August 27, 2013, 12:01:05 AM »

Nice treatment - black sand, blue ice, white/grey sea/sky, dark mood, no distractions.

For my taste the subject would breathe better if the horizon were lifted and the pano less extreme.

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Re: Jokulsa Beach, Iceland
« Reply #2 on: August 27, 2013, 02:48:03 AM »

I agree.

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Re: Jokulsa Beach, Iceland
« Reply #3 on: August 27, 2013, 04:44:09 AM »

This?
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Re: Jokulsa Beach, Iceland
« Reply #4 on: August 27, 2013, 04:53:21 AM »

I like the second version better. Not only the crop, but the addition of the color in the sky works also.
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Re: Jokulsa Beach, Iceland
« Reply #5 on: August 27, 2013, 05:53:19 AM »

I like both versions but the second one is more classical…
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Re: Jokulsa Beach, Iceland
« Reply #6 on: August 27, 2013, 07:09:01 AM »

This?
Yes, + the wispy cloud mass balances the composition.

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Re: Jokulsa Beach, Iceland
« Reply #7 on: August 27, 2013, 08:43:17 AM »

Many thanks  ;D
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Re: Jokulsa Beach, Iceland
« Reply #8 on: August 27, 2013, 10:38:27 AM »

I like the second version better. Not only the crop, but the addition of the color in the sky works also.
Ditto.
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Re: Jokulsa Beach, Iceland
« Reply #9 on: August 27, 2013, 11:26:10 AM »

Nice one, Paul!
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