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Chris Calohan

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Rooms with a View
« on: August 25, 2013, 07:47:58 pm »

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Re: Rooms with a View
« Reply #1 on: August 26, 2013, 01:56:19 am »

Nicely seen. The only thing i don't like about the composition is the dueling receding perspective lines. I think the upper one is more interesting.

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Re: Rooms with a View
« Reply #2 on: August 26, 2013, 02:28:15 am »

I agree.

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Re: Rooms with a View
« Reply #3 on: August 26, 2013, 07:29:25 am »

Eliminate the last three balconies?
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Re: Rooms with a View
« Reply #4 on: August 26, 2013, 09:51:01 am »

It lets me remember the archetype (maybe) of the genre of this photo: the balconies of the Bauhaus photographed by Moholy-Nagy.
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Re: Rooms with a View
« Reply #5 on: August 26, 2013, 09:59:31 am »

Eliminate the last three balconies?
Yes. I like this very much, but they are distracting to my eye. I also think the tones are right on.

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Re: Rooms with a View
« Reply #6 on: August 26, 2013, 10:15:00 am »

I had several other perspectives of this shot. I think in lieu of the comments, this view might evoke a more pronounced visual and I think emotional response. And yes, very much Moholy-Nagy influence here.

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Re: Rooms with a View
« Reply #7 on: August 26, 2013, 10:34:56 am »

Personally, I like the original left right framing and have just chopped at the edge of the other balconies; changes the aspect ration though. If I had to choose between the two, I'd pick the OP. Than "hanging diagonals" appeal to me
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