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Ed Blagden

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Giraffes at dawn
« on: August 21, 2013, 03:44:14 pm »

Hi

I took a very long break from photography and from posting on this forum.  Would appreciate C&C on this one.

Ed

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Re: Giraffes at dawn
« Reply #1 on: August 21, 2013, 05:53:38 pm »

Very nice Ed.
You have used the conditions to produce a very evocative image.

Tony Jay
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Re: Giraffes at dawn
« Reply #2 on: August 21, 2013, 05:55:16 pm »

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Re: Giraffes at dawn
« Reply #3 on: August 21, 2013, 06:01:43 pm »

What makes this one special is the two tall trees upper left and the two tall animals balancing the image nicely.
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Re: Giraffes at dawn
« Reply #4 on: August 21, 2013, 08:44:41 pm »

Applause from me, too. I wouldn't change a thing.
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Re: Giraffes at dawn
« Reply #5 on: August 22, 2013, 12:00:16 am »

I find the two animal gestures work against each other and keep the photograph from becoming a picture.  But I think you have two superb pictures here.  One with the more stately pose and the two trees others have mentioned, and another with the pose with the less immediately decipherable contours.  In the first case, the whole is beautifully of-a-piece, and tranquilly balanced, with just the hair on the back of the animal, and the bump of the chest muscles, and the very slight tilt of the head, registering a kind of potency in reserve.  The white birds (?) on the ground complete the scene.  In the second case, the tranquility of the environment is countered by the awkward stance of the animal.  One looks for its eyes, and one realizes they are focussed in the murky low afar, and one feels that the tranquility is charged with a very different kind of potential.

Light and edges v. nice throughout, esp. around the contours of the animals and in the soft light above the grasslands but below the lower green canopy.

The band of light is too light for my taste, but is surely not the kind of thing one can judge well from an on-line image.

A pleasure to view and to examine.   :)

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Re: Giraffes at dawn
« Reply #6 on: August 22, 2013, 12:23:13 pm »

Thanks all for your kind words.

Kirby - I think I get what you are saying but I guess I look at the photo in a slightly different way.  Please don't take this the wrong way because I appreciate your criticism but I would not want the photo more "posed".  To my eye these are just a couple of giraffes doing what giraffes do... the picture for me is really of some amazing dawn light and mist and the giraffes are ornamentation and give some structure to the shot.

I know what you mean about the light streak.  There was a shaft of sunlight and it made this bright misty streak on the ground... I may have enhanced it a bit in post but I kind of like it.
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