I find the sky a bit overprocessed, too "crunchy," as if the Clarity slider pushed too far (or whatever local-contrast enhancement technique you used). That results in the image having two distinct parts, competing for attention: foreground and background. I find the foreground interesting and its color pleasing. I think, however, that the same color treatment across the image is counterproductive. I think that slightly cooler (bluer) treatment for the sky might work better.