I would ask yourself what are the subjects. If one is mood, and I would say it is...is it enough to carry the mid-ground, and the buildings in mid-ground and the their landscape, and the lower portion of the mtns....the buildings are not that interesting to me, and have no interesting light, or perhaps enough of/ or right light on them. The middle ground seems to me the "black hole" in this image if you will...and you may not be able to get around it. If you shot color and converted...do you have some lens cast color issues where it's blown out upper left?