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mseawell

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Touched
« on: June 24, 2013, 05:30:28 PM »

Shafts of light cut through the darkness to light up a tree...touched.
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Re: Touched
« Reply #1 on: June 24, 2013, 05:37:16 PM »

Cool idea. I wish to see slightly more definition in the background trees though. I am also not sure about the pinkish fog. A bit more golden, perhaps? Or b&w?

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Re: Touched
« Reply #2 on: June 24, 2013, 05:57:58 PM »

Cheers! It does make a strong b&W. Wanted to experiment in colour to see how it would come out. Thanks for the suggestions!

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Re: Touched
« Reply #3 on: June 25, 2013, 03:26:27 AM »

I like the idea but would either go with B&W or, as Slobodan suggested, a warmer (yellow/gold) light. The scene is interesting as one discovers details slowly!
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Re: Touched
« Reply #4 on: June 25, 2013, 04:27:41 AM »

I think the colour version works really well, due to the added warmth and glow.
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