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amolitor

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A Tulip.
« on: April 08, 2013, 11:22:34 AM »

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Bruce Cox

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Re: A Tulip.
« Reply #1 on: April 08, 2013, 04:12:52 PM »

Your framing makes the reflection dominate.  "Water" might be a better title.
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nemo295

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Re: A Tulip.
« Reply #2 on: April 09, 2013, 02:22:33 PM »

it's very nice, but I wish it wasn't cropped so tightly at the top.
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Re: A Tulip.
« Reply #3 on: April 09, 2013, 02:29:56 PM »

I like it, but I also wish it weren't quite so tightly cropped at the top. I also don't understand the double reflection.

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Re: A Tulip.
« Reply #4 on: April 09, 2013, 07:24:20 PM »

appealing, but seems to be cut short on top...
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Re: A Tulip.
« Reply #5 on: April 09, 2013, 10:36:11 PM »

I'd like to see 80-90% of the top cropped off.
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amolitor

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Re: A Tulip.
« Reply #6 on: April 10, 2013, 10:23:33 AM »

Thanks, everyone! I love it as it, of course, but when 100% of the responses say 'the top is wrong' I am gonna have to accept that the top is wrong ;)

Interesting idea, Ed! It's supposed to be about the reflection, and maybe that's the way to go. Hmm.
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Re: A Tulip.
« Reply #7 on: April 10, 2013, 11:32:11 PM »

Thanks, everyone! I love it as it, of course, but when 100% of the responses say 'the top is wrong' I am gonna have to accept that the top is wrong ;)

Interesting idea, Ed! It's supposed to be about the reflection, and maybe that's the way to go. Hmm.


The reflection is much more interesting to me and the more I think about it, I'd like to see all of the top go away. The brightness of the flower keeps drawing my attention away from the reflection.
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Re: A Tulip.
« Reply #8 on: April 11, 2013, 06:18:56 AM »

I'd like to see 80-90% of the top cropped off.
~50%. Quite striking, however.
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