Hi and welcome to the forum!
Comments: on the technical side, it looks like an HDR (not a criticism, btw), yet the sky around sun seems burned out?
Esthetically, I like the overall muted tonality, quite appropriate for a frozen sunset atmosphere. I like the panorama format as well, and especially how the length of the bridge is used to frame it and add to that "industrial feel." I also like the structure and pattern of the ice.
What I find less congruent with the main idea of a "messy industrial feel" is that port itself is much less prominent in the image, obscured by bridge, and instead we have a dominant, almost idilic row of houses and trees as the center of interest.
In any case, good start here!