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garyhill
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April 04, 2013, 09:32:17 am »
The attached image is taken in Newcastle, Australia and shows Nobby's Lighthouse in the distance. This image is part of a portfolio that I am slowly building to offer for sale in my local area. This is not a local scene as such for me, but Nobbys is well known to anyone who has spent time in Newcastle.
Comments and suggestions for improvement welcome.
Cheers,
Gary
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April 04, 2013, 10:05:01 am »
A very fine image. IMHO, I want to put a half stop exposure gradient from foreground to horizon. Love the colors.
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April 04, 2013, 06:33:20 pm »
I like the composition and the colors of this picture but I'm not unbiased as love rocky shore-lines in general.
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April 04, 2013, 10:53:06 pm »
I like the angles, colours and motion. A little dark in the foreground?
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April 05, 2013, 07:54:09 am »
I like it as it is… The foreground might be a tad dark but it doesn't grab my eyes…
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Quote from: sdwilsonsct on April 04, 2013, 10:53:06 pm
I like the angles, colours and motion. A little dark in the foreground?
I think so too Gary.
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April 05, 2013, 10:28:16 am »
Hi Gary,
I like your photo, but
I think it can be improved by stressing the diagonal in lower-left part.
Here is what I mean (it’s a lousy job just to show the idea):
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April 05, 2013, 11:10:14 am »
This is my kind of image and I don't see anything that can be improved in a meaningful way. A mistake - imo - is to keep making small tweaks and never be satisfied. This is something that should sell well and very likeable.
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April 08, 2013, 06:07:17 pm »
Thank you for the comments and suggestions. I appreciate the feedback.
Cheers,
Gary
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