I think it is a good composition, which would have been made better if the background was rendered soft with a more minimal depth of field. When I shoot flowers or other plants and the scene or background is busy, I always try for a soft bokeh. It is more difficult than people think, It is, more often than not, a compromise, due to the inherent limited DOF. I also try to vary the focus point, because trying to see the true range of sharp focus through a dark prism, is very difficult.
JMR
