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Jeremy Roussak

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« on: March 23, 2013, 01:00:01 pm »

Thoughts?

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« Reply #1 on: March 23, 2013, 01:19:34 pm »

It's a nice shot but doesn't do much to move me in one direction or another, but in the current direction I'm going, I certianly appreciate it for the line, pattern and angle of presentation.
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Re: avoca
« Reply #2 on: March 23, 2013, 03:27:44 pm »

Pretty colors. I wonder if moving closer to the rocks and heather a bit to the left of center, with a wider angle (or more stitching?) and a somewhat more exaggerated downward angle on the lens would lend a little more drama or depth. I would be looking for a subtle effect so that the beautiful hill in the bkg is not lost. FWIW.

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« Reply #3 on: March 24, 2013, 10:57:12 am »

A satisfying composition with the the masses of cloud, land and furze converging on the right.

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Re: avoca
« Reply #4 on: March 24, 2013, 01:47:24 pm »

I'm with Chris and David. It has nice elements but doesn't really come together for me as a satisfying whole.
I think a longer shot with a tele, concentrating on the distant hills plus some sky might work better.
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Re: avoca
« Reply #5 on: March 24, 2013, 02:01:11 pm »

Fair points, all. Thanks.

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