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Jeremy Roussak
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Thoughts?
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March 23, 2013, 01:19:34 pm »
It's a nice shot but doesn't do much to move me in one direction or another, but in the current direction I'm going, I certianly appreciate it for the line, pattern and angle of presentation.
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March 23, 2013, 03:27:44 pm »
Pretty colors. I wonder if moving closer to the rocks and heather a bit to the left of center, with a wider angle (or more stitching?) and a somewhat more exaggerated downward angle on the lens would lend a little more drama or depth. I would be looking for a subtle effect so that the beautiful hill in the bkg is not lost. FWIW.
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March 24, 2013, 10:57:12 am »
A satisfying composition with the the masses of cloud, land and furze converging on the right.
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March 24, 2013, 01:47:24 pm »
I'm with Chris and David. It has nice elements but doesn't really come together for me as a satisfying whole.
I think a longer shot with a tele, concentrating on the distant hills plus some sky might work better.
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Fair points, all. Thanks.
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