To me the first image seems to capture the place best.Tony Jay
Oh, Sanggay, much better, in my view! My suggestion would be to "crisp" them up a little and the cropping on the lower wall in #6 is problematic, but I don't know what your constraints are with the original image. I think the composition with these is very much improved. Cemeteries have inherent gesture and implication, but it's up to you to provide contrast; if you haven't read Michael Reichmann's essay, on "Why What Works-Contrast, Gesture, and Implication" it is definitely worth a read.
All of these are very nice, if somewhat underexposed. #1 is may favorite. The colors are so muted that Iwondered what it would look like in monochrome, so I took the liberty of doing a quick and dirty conversion.