This is another attempt at something that's a bit abstract. Sometimes when I look at this, it makes my brain hurt because there is no way that putting something up vertically seems to work for a "looking down" view - at least not one that implies motion such as that from the water.
What do others think?
That's just the problem of knowing too much.
Had I not read your post, I would have thought myself looking at an interesting piece of marble. You have got to be able to divorce your mind from your eye sometimes. Take nature, life, a wall, whatever as your raw material and from it, fashion an independent image.
I think that without explanation, you shot works perfectly all right.