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Sanggay

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Shadow on the wall.
« on: February 22, 2013, 07:36:55 am »
I am new to this kind of photography. I wonder if this works.

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Jeremy Roussak

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Re: Shadow on the wall.
« Reply #1 on: February 22, 2013, 03:10:40 pm »
Quote from: Sanggay on February 22, 2013, 07:36:55 am
I am new to this kind of photography. I wonder if this works.

Not for me. It might have been better without the shadow of whatever is protruding above the railings, interfering with the thing on the wall.

Jeremy
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Re: Shadow on the wall.
« Reply #2 on: February 22, 2013, 03:30:54 pm »
Sorry Sanggay, I have to agree with Jeremy. It's missing a central point of interest and the shadows don't really contribute.
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Re: Shadow on the wall.
« Reply #3 on: February 22, 2013, 08:55:39 pm »
Thanks for pointing that out.
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