I quite like it, the geometry and the personalities are nice.
I don't like the noise, and I feel like the horse team is mis-placed. Not that you're in a position to go moving it around, of course, but I think this would have been stronger a minute or two earlier, always assuming the boys where equally fortuitously placed. It definitely has that Long Lens feel to it, which gives it a slightly uncomfortable look, like surveillance footage. I don't really know if that uncomfortableness adds, detracts, or is neutral.