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MTGFender

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Great Sand Dunes National Park
« on: January 26, 2013, 04:44:51 AM »

Alamosa, CO
Phase One DF; Phase One IQ 180; Schneider LS 150mm

Thanks for viewing!
Have a great weekend!
Pramote
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Re: Great Sand Dunes National Park
« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2013, 02:45:57 PM »

Alamosa, CO

I'm not keen on all the blurred sand in the foreground, Pramote.

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Re: Great Sand Dunes National Park
« Reply #2 on: January 27, 2013, 12:21:18 PM »

I also think that the foreground should have been ignored. It adds nothing. The play of light on the curve is interesting and enough for a good shot.
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Re: Great Sand Dunes National Park
« Reply #3 on: January 27, 2013, 02:59:42 PM »

Thanks my friends! Let's try this one.
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Re: Great Sand Dunes National Park
« Reply #4 on: January 27, 2013, 03:25:44 PM »

Yes! Stronger composition.

Mark

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Re: Great Sand Dunes National Park
« Reply #5 on: January 27, 2013, 03:32:00 PM »

Thanks my friends! Let's try this one.

I think even Russ would agree that that's a big improvement. Aren't sand dunes in interesting light wonderful?

Jeremy
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Re: Great Sand Dunes National Park
« Reply #6 on: January 28, 2013, 03:09:29 AM »

Thanks my friends! Let's try this one.

Oh, yes! This one is much much better…
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Re: Great Sand Dunes National Park
« Reply #7 on: January 28, 2013, 10:05:32 AM »

Oh, yes! This one is much much better…
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Re: Great Sand Dunes National Park
« Reply #8 on: January 28, 2013, 07:05:35 PM »

Much improved composition with the revision.
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Re: Great Sand Dunes National Park
« Reply #9 on: February 02, 2013, 11:24:43 AM »

Thanks everyone! Pramote
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