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marvpelkey

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Bridge in fog
« on: January 21, 2013, 09:03:04 PM »

Little bit of fog, little bit of sunrise, little bit of bridge.

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Re: Bridge in fog
« Reply #1 on: January 21, 2013, 10:00:41 PM »

Nice abstract qualities.

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Re: Bridge in fog
« Reply #2 on: January 22, 2013, 03:13:37 AM »

Little bit of fog, little bit of sunrise, little bit of bridge.

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It's good - but it's a shame about the street lamp.

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Re: Bridge in fog
« Reply #3 on: January 22, 2013, 06:15:51 AM »

It's good - but it's a shame about the street lamp.

Jeremy

It wouldn't be hard to remove it from the photo. As it is, the lamp is probably in the best possible place.
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Re: Bridge in fog
« Reply #4 on: January 22, 2013, 01:03:34 PM »

The street lamp doesn't bother me. I like it just as it is.
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Re: Bridge in fog
« Reply #5 on: January 22, 2013, 02:41:19 PM »

It's good - but it's a shame about the street lamp.

Jeremy

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Re: Bridge in fog
« Reply #6 on: January 22, 2013, 03:07:26 PM »

Unless the point of the picture is intended to be unidentified diagonals in fog I think the lamp is an important part of the picture. Without the lamp, the only reason to see this as a bridge is the title. But the lamp belongs closer to the right side of the picture -- about a third of the way in from the edge. Yes, I know, everybody will tell you that we shouldn't genuflect to the rule of thirds, and occasionally that's an attitude that fits the situation. But not this time.

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Re: Bridge in fog
« Reply #7 on: January 22, 2013, 05:35:10 PM »

I'm anti-lamp on this one. I like the colours and composition.

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Re: Bridge in fog
« Reply #8 on: January 22, 2013, 08:51:31 PM »

There are strong graphical elements in this image and lovely light. In short there is a lot to like. I do think it would be stronger without the light pole though as its counterproductive to the strong ordered geometry.

Great capture.

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Re: Bridge in fog
« Reply #9 on: January 22, 2013, 09:30:39 PM »

Thanks, all, for the comments. To my right was some very cold river water, to my left a thicket of brambles, so I was quite restricted in what I could do with the composition. Having said that, I kind of like the inclusion of the lamp.

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