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Pastel sunset / Old boat
« on: December 11, 2012, 12:04:22 PM »

Here a couple from today...



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Re: Pastel sunset / Old boat
« Reply #2 on: December 11, 2012, 02:58:50 PM »

The first image shows a beautiful location, though it does look a little over saturated for my taste

Or just too pinky-purple. It can't really have been that colour, can it?

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Re: Pastel sunset / Old boat
« Reply #3 on: December 11, 2012, 07:22:13 PM »

I have to admit #1 makes my eyes bleed but I reallly like it. Donít change a thing!

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Re: Pastel sunset / Old boat
« Reply #4 on: December 12, 2012, 02:50:35 AM »

#1 is fantastic... maybe a bit too much?
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Re: Pastel sunset / Old boat
« Reply #5 on: December 12, 2012, 09:03:53 AM »

The colors (in the first one) are Velvia-like. As I mentioned in another thread, there is a certain "truthiness" in it, so no need to change anything. In a word: splendid!

The second shot... hmmm... for me, it doesn't work in color, too muddy. Not sure it would work in b&w either, as I find the composition to stark, and content too banal. Furthermore, the wispy clouds look more like sensor dirt (though I guess only photographers would think of it like that).

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Re: Pastel sunset / Old boat
« Reply #6 on: December 12, 2012, 11:27:45 AM »

First ist very good, would not change the color. Background with the ships is a bit cluttered, I would try some cloning work, possibly removing the ship next to the right of the foreground-ship and the diagonal stuff over it just to see if that helps.
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