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Riaan van Wyk

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9/12/12
« on: December 09, 2012, 04:21:12 AM »

Thoughts please?
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Bruce Cox

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Re: 9/12/12
« Reply #1 on: December 09, 2012, 10:02:00 AM »

You are getting good at this impossibly ambitious scene.  This is the best fore ground I can remember.        Nevertheless, at the risk of seeming glib, I suggest, instead of darkening the wood where it is against the sky, color it a fairly saturated international orange there.  As it is, the darkened wood is making it difficult for the space behind to recede to the appropriately cosmic dimensions.

Bruce   
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Riaan van Wyk

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Re: 9/12/12
« Reply #2 on: December 12, 2012, 02:32:11 AM »

Thanks for looking Bruce.
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