Hum... I see the intend but the result doesn't work for me.
The far edge of the pond with what seems to be mini waterfalls is too close to the upper edge of the image. It detracts from the main subject and is shown either too much or too little.
If the edge is important, then such a wide pano might not be the best form factor.
Other than that, white balance seems a bit odd also.
I agree that the left part is also distracting.