There's a lot of really great elements in here. There's also a powerful, and I think deliberate based on the way you framed it, visual flow from left to right. My problem is that there's nothing there on the right. My eyes are drawn strongly off to the right side of the frame where there is.. nothing to look at.
The way you clipped the roofline on the left bothers me slightly, but in the first place I realize that it's probably just more junk and more junk further to the right, so something's gonna get clipped, and in the second place it really supports and emphasizes that left-to-right structure. If there was a guy standing by that window on the right, this would be perfect.
You're using your street eyes on landscapes, and it's interesting as hell. I'm not convinced that it's fully working, yet.
All that said, this is a wonderful object, and a good and revealing photograph of that object.