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Rjohan

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Panorama from the morning light
« on: August 18, 2012, 04:01:59 am »

Hello everyone!

So, this morning I had the alarm set to 03:20. During this week we have had quite a lot of fog in the morning here in Stockholm, Sweden. Lovely, but it's annoying that you can't go out and shoot when you're on your way to work..
Today I had some nice fog and got some shots I like. The image below is a panorama made by 9 vertical images. Hope you like it!



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Re: Panorama from the morning light
« Reply #1 on: August 18, 2012, 09:52:50 am »

Early bird! I like it but wish that the sky had more features (either a bit more contrast or colours; certainly not Velvia-like). It's a peaceful shot.

Edit: I'm looking at your image on my very old MacBook display, so my remark might not be valid at all.
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Re: Panorama from the morning light
« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2012, 02:50:25 pm »

Thank you for the comment! The sky is kinda weak in the colors but that's how I saw it that morning, I don't like to push my images too much in LR.
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Re: Panorama from the morning light
« Reply #3 on: August 20, 2012, 03:26:04 pm »

To me, the most interesting part of the image is the mid-right.  The foreground doesn't do much for me at this size. I think I would crop out 2/3 of the left and work with the horizontal lines formed from the fore,mid and backgrounds.
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Re: Panorama from the morning light
« Reply #4 on: August 20, 2012, 04:06:44 pm »

I agree that the elements don't quite hang together somehow. Crop off the right 1/3?

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Re: Panorama from the morning light
« Reply #5 on: August 21, 2012, 03:27:22 am »

Thank you for the comment! The sky is kinda weak in the colors but that's how I saw it that morning, I don't like to push my images too much in LR.

Got to see it on a proper display and the sky is just right. You're right, for that kind of image, no need to push saturation…
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Re: Panorama from the morning light
« Reply #6 on: August 21, 2012, 01:00:12 pm »

Thank you for the critique about the crop, I'll try it out!
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