which one do you prefer, if any? they are in order, minimally corrected, somehow corrected, mostly corrected.
I like the first one..minimally corrected because it seems to ahve more 'energy'. Now I can't fully expain the term 'energy'.... but it seems to be more - dynamic/fluid/have more mo-jo. (and I can't describe mo-jo either; but for those whose native language is English, you may have an appreciation of what I am trying to describe ...
The others seem more restrained and stilted.