THe man in the Garage

[douvidl]

My second image for your consideration.
David

[Ken Bennett]

I like it. For some reason I think it works better small rather than large. And while I'm not normally a slave to the "rules" of composition, I do wish he had a little more breathing room on the right side of the image. Also, have you tried it in b+w?

[Chris Calohan]

Rather than breathing room, I'd like to see the slight bit of shadow to the right side get disappeared. It would put the man closer to the edge, but I don't see that as having particular consequence.

[Tony Jay]

I think Chris has a point.
In fact I would try several different crops to see what happens.
This image has a lot of potential.

Regards

Tony Jay

[douvidl]

To all, thanks
David

[RSL]

Rather than breathing room, I'd like to see the slight bit of shadow to the right side get disappeared. It would put the man closer to the edge, but I don't see that as having particular consequence.

Rather than the shadow, what ought to disappear is that lighter shade of barf green just below the guy's chin.

[fike]

I agree that it is better when displayed smaller.  The image has some tension and edginess that more intriguing than beautiful.  As for the framing, I agree that more breathing room on the right might have helped a bit.  You could try content aware scaling in PS to possibly add a tiny bit more room there. 

[JohnAONeill]

I like the concept of this image. I agree with others that this looks better smaller than large, but I think this aspect could be fixed in post production. For me the bright area in the top right could be toned down a little. The eye is automatically drawn to the brightest part of the image which in this case is the least interesting part. I think I would increase contrast on the man to create more a silhouette effect. The added detail here does not (for me) add to the overall impression.

Nice shot though!

John

[RSL]

Just a thought. At least it gets rid of the puke green on the wall. The downside is that the over-sharpening shows up more clearly on the guy's head.