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michswiss

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Cole and Greg
« on: August 03, 2012, 08:56:45 am »

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Re: Cole and Greg
« Reply #1 on: August 03, 2012, 09:08:13 am »

There's a touch of the HCB respect for geometry in here, if you look closely. Interesting guys, nicely portrayed, but it's the rest of the frame that really makes it go.
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Re: Cole and Greg
« Reply #2 on: August 03, 2012, 09:36:11 am »

Wonderful!
So many elements work together so well: the two gents in foreground, the more distant head between them, even the signs on the walls.
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Re: Cole and Greg
« Reply #3 on: August 03, 2012, 10:50:24 am »

It's a fine shot, Jen, and Andrew's right, it has the kind of geometry I'm used to seeing in HCB's shots. But, HCB was big on middle-grays, and his printer never would have let the front part of Cole's face go that low. (I'm assuming Cole's the guy on the left as we look at the picture.) It's a small nitpick, but small nitpicks are what make the difference between really good stuff and astonishing stuff.

In any case, you're back in the genre you deal with best. Good shooting.  Let's see more.
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Re: Cole and Greg
« Reply #4 on: August 03, 2012, 06:44:29 pm »

For me, the chap on the left is so poorly rendered that he might best be cropped off.  The face is obscured by shadow, the texture and tone of the pullover dominate for no good reason and there is no real interaction between the two men.  In fact, the chap on the right looks somewhat too posed and camera aware for me.

There is a stronger image in a square crop with the fellow on the right and the silhouetted figure in the middle distance.  Isolated on his own, the posing guy's attitude is more acceptable.



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Re: Cole and Greg
« Reply #5 on: August 04, 2012, 10:52:48 am »


In any case, you're back in the genre you deal with best. Good shooting.  Let's see more.


I'll joke about it, telling folks that if you approach me while I have a camera in hand, I'll take your picture.  And I will.  But I'm annoyed at the idea that I have a genre that I should stick with.  I take shots of things or people that interest me, or in some cases simply there.  I'm not going for a genre or oeuvre.  I am pleased that I seem to be developing a personal style. Something recognisable in it's own right.  But I won't be held accountable if I deviate from it, or from solely taking shots of folks I run into or know.

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Re: Cole and Greg
« Reply #6 on: August 04, 2012, 12:03:20 pm »

My, my, aren't we sensitive today. Yes, if you shoot a crappy branch with fading leaves and out-of-focus berries that happens to be there, there's nothing wrong with that, though posting it might make someone question your judgment about your own work. Whether or not you're willing to be held accountable for what you post, you can't avoid being held accountable.

You do good work, Jennifer, especially on the street, which is why I call that the genre you deal with best. When you step outside street what I see mostly are snapshots. You've posted some fine photographs, but I'm still waiting for that killer shot -- the kind of thing upon which you'd be willing to hang your reputation. This one isn't it.

I suspect hanging out on "Documentary" (which ought to be re-named "Snapshots") is what leads you to produce this kind of extreme, distracting contrast. I'll say it again: the geometry is excellent, but I agree with Walter about the guy on the left. You know what I think about cropping, but this is one I'd crop. I don't agree with Walter that the guy on the right is too posed. His hostile expression is what makes the picture. A vertical, slicing off the guy on the left, and then a contrast reduction that reduces the texture in Greg's sweater and subdues his hands, so they're not the eye's grab-point, would make a different, and in my opinion, better picture. It still wouldn't be a killer, but it would be a good photograph. Unfortunately, Photoshop won't parse the Sony jpeg, or I'd demonstrate.
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