Thanks Mike and Scott,
Scott - I agree about the out of focus, but it was hand held @f/3.2 .. not much light and I didn't bring my tripod.
Regarding the crop you made - personally, I would prefer a square format and tried that, but I realize I cannot get rid of the oof issue then, so your crop is better at that point. Got to go back with my tripod some day and be a bit more serious.
Anyway, I tried the square - I did say
abstract, so I tried a different approach to distract you from the oof.. I reversed it. Not quite there though..
I have a bunch of these, too.
Would be nice to see a few?