I agree with your original choice of shot, Jim. Nice skin and colour, and shame about the breast, but there you are - some wives/assistants are like that. You could have fired the assistant but a wife is something else - better take no hasty actions, though you could think about separating the two rĂ´les.
Not that I can talk: my wife was also my assistant/temper-monitor/client-rescuing service/etc./etc., but she didn't mind at all about me shooting breasts - as she always retorted to her girlfriends when they asked her if she wasn't concerned about models hanging around: well, doesn't your husband have a secretary back in the office...? I don't think they liked that too much. That's the thing about an intelligent lady - she knows you can't enchain a person and hope to keep it. However, I never shared that sentiment the other way around; I just wasn't that intelligent.
Worse, there is no girl across the way I'd like to photograph.
Dogs, days etc.
;-(
Rob C