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chrisj8891

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Thoughts on improvement?
« on: May 01, 2012, 08:22:24 AM »

I would welcome any thought on how this could be improved,,
thanks
Chris
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Brad Smith

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Re: Thoughts on improvement?
« Reply #1 on: May 02, 2012, 07:18:35 AM »

Nice scene!

I might have waited a few more seconds for the sailboat to clear the tall tree behind it, providing some additional separation. Perhaps the ideal position is with the sailboat between that tree and the mountain in the background.
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Re: Thoughts on improvement?
« Reply #2 on: May 02, 2012, 09:12:49 AM »

Yes. I agree. The boat and the tree behind it are in conflict, regarding good composition considerations.
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chrisj8891

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Re: Thoughts on improvement?
« Reply #3 on: May 02, 2012, 10:50:07 AM »

Nice scene!

I might have waited a few more seconds for the sailboat to clear the tall tree behind it, providing some additional separation. Perhaps the ideal position is with the sailboat between that tree and the mountain in the background.

Thanks for the comments, I do agree, composition a little off
The photo was "snatched" from onboard a nile cruise boat as it arose, so not really in a great postion for much consideration at the time,,,
now I am going to give moving the sailboat in CS5 a shot, and exercise my limited retouching talents

thanks
Chris
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