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Tony Jay

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Pacific Rainbow - North Stradbroke Island
« on: April 22, 2012, 06:23:08 AM »

A seascape cum weatherscape.

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Tony Jay
« Last Edit: April 22, 2012, 06:27:22 AM by Tony Jay »
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Re: Pacific Rainbow - North Stradbroke Island
« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2012, 01:22:54 PM »

Nice one, Tony. Have you tried either removing or filling the dark area at the top right? It adds another layer, which doesn't really work for me.

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Re: Pacific Rainbow - North Stradbroke Island
« Reply #2 on: April 22, 2012, 03:52:25 PM »

I like this, especially the action in the white cloud. I agree with Jeremy that the top right corner looks out of place.
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Re: Pacific Rainbow - North Stradbroke Island
« Reply #3 on: April 22, 2012, 04:18:47 PM »

Thank you for your feedback.

It is true that this image, despite much potential, has given me some indigestion.
Given that it includes a rainbow individual colour manipulation is very difficult without making the rainbow look strange.

Thank you for the input regarding the top right.
I will certainly have another look at this.

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Re: Pacific Rainbow - North Stradbroke Island
« Reply #4 on: April 22, 2012, 08:17:05 PM »

If you cover up the dark area in the upper right your picture falls apart. Keep it!



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Re: Pacific Rainbow - North Stradbroke Island
« Reply #5 on: April 23, 2012, 04:00:42 AM »

Thanks for the continuing feedback I will consider all the options suggested.

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Re: Pacific Rainbow - North Stradbroke Island
« Reply #6 on: May 19, 2012, 07:43:18 PM »

Thanks to everyone for the useful advice.
I did a small crop to remove the dark cloud on the top right.
I also redid the tonal rendition as well as a slight change to white balance.
The result in my opinion now is much improved - the print looks magnificent.

Later today or tomorrow I will post the reworked image.

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