FWIW and IMO, I like the first one as subject, except for the lower half; I'd mask off the sky and give the low area a blast of Curves.
As it is, the lower half looks, to me, as of it was a bady exposed wet print that needed less exposure but more development. In other words, it has the 'milky' look of a bad wet black/white print.
Or it could be my monitor has gone funny on me.
But shucks, I work with a cellphone these days; that changes everything!
;-)
Rob C