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sjordan93436

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California sunrise
« on: April 01, 2012, 12:49:23 pm »

My first Luminous Landscape upload.  A sunrise in Lompoc. 
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rambler44

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Re: California sunrise
« Reply #1 on: April 03, 2012, 08:57:35 pm »

Those green lines of the foreground works, and wonderful color in that sky!
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Re: California sunrise
« Reply #2 on: April 03, 2012, 11:32:21 pm »

Welcome to LL. Beautiful sky
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Thank you for looking, comments and critiques are always welcome.
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Re: California sunrise
« Reply #3 on: April 04, 2012, 03:48:29 am »

Those green lines of the foreground works, and wonderful color in that sky!
Agreed. Shame about what's in between, though.

Jeremy
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Re: California sunrise
« Reply #4 on: April 04, 2012, 02:52:13 pm »

Agreed. Shame about what's in between, though.

Too real?
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Re: California sunrise
« Reply #5 on: April 04, 2012, 05:06:07 pm »

Too real?
Real, yes. Ugly, yes. Spoiling the beautiful image, yes. Fixable, probably not.

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Isaac

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Re: California sunrise
« Reply #6 on: April 05, 2012, 02:10:44 pm »

Real, yes. Ugly, yes. Spoiling the beautiful image, yes.

Ahh! I forget that it's a Facebook world: "beautiful" = Like, "ugly" = Don't Like.

It's unfortunate that there seems to be a tree top silhouette breaking the horizon above the building (clone and be damned), and a tiny tiny misfortune that the car is skewered by the telephone pole. Maybe the sky has blocks of solid colour - How to record more tones in dawn skys?
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Jeremy Roussak

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Re: California sunrise
« Reply #7 on: April 05, 2012, 04:11:13 pm »

Yes, of course. You like the building and telegraph posts and wish to admire them. I don't. Objectively, they're ugly.

Your comments belie your reproach. And that would be "skies", I assume.

Jeremy
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Re: California sunrise
« Reply #8 on: April 05, 2012, 04:21:05 pm »

You like the building and telegraph posts and wish to admire them.
Not true.

Objectively, they're ugly.
Objectively! :-)

Your comments belie your reproach.
My specific comments are in contrast to your generalities.
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