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sailronin

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Pedro St. James House, Grand Cayman Island
« on: February 26, 2012, 10:37:14 AM »



Leaning supplies, buckets and rake.
Leica M8 w/50mm Summicron



Bucket, broom and hat in the main house.
M8 w/50mm Summicron
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Re: Pedro St. James House, Grand Cayman Island
« Reply #1 on: February 26, 2012, 12:49:32 PM »

I like the second one very much. I think it would be improved by some perspective correction, so the door doesn't look as if it's leaning, and by lightening the upper right corner, where the shadow looks like a vignette.

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Re: Pedro St. James House, Grand Cayman Island
« Reply #2 on: February 26, 2012, 03:47:41 PM »

Interesting "still life" images, both of them. Further to kikashi's comment, the first image would also be improved by correcting distortion - in this case though, it is apparent lens barrel distortion that could be corrected.

I like the colour palette of these images - muted - yet contrast seems high. Perhaps reducing contrast would allow the muted colours to "sit" better within the contrast range of the photographs.
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