Topic: twig (Read 898 times)

Jeremy Roussak · « **on:** November 13, 2011, 08:06:30 am »

Comments?

Jeremy

Riaan van Wyk · « **Reply #1 on:** November 17, 2011, 02:32:26 pm »

For me, a tighter composition on the trees would have worked better Jeremy. The detail I would like to see on them is too subtle.

Farmer · « **Reply #2 on:** November 17, 2011, 06:15:10 pm »

The angles work for me, although I'm wondering if a square presentation would help to accentuate those lines?

Also, the plants on the right with the white tops are a little distracting from what to me is all about the lines and angles - too bright.

Overall, though, I find it interesting and it draws me in.

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Jeremy Roussak

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Riaan van Wyk

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Farmer

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