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PasZ

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Árboles del Delta - Argentina
« on: September 22, 2011, 06:28:02 pm »

Hi there! Im posting my first photo in the forum
It was taken with my new D90 gripped with my new Tokina 12-24 F4 MkII @12mm

My english is very poor, sorry!

Delta Trees




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Jose L

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Re: Árboles del Delta - Argentina
« Reply #1 on: September 26, 2011, 02:22:55 pm »

Creo que exposición y definición estan conseguidas. Para mi creo que sobra la parte inferior de los arbustos que no añade nada a tu fotografía, quiza distrae. Enhorabuena y saludos.
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Re: Árboles del Delta - Argentina
« Reply #2 on: September 29, 2011, 08:10:42 pm »

Creo que exposición y definición estan conseguidas. Para mi creo que sobra la parte inferior de los arbustos que no añade nada a tu fotografía, quiza distrae. Enhorabuena y saludos.
Muchas gracias por tu comentario, agrega mucho tu aporte. Saludos!
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Re: Árboles del Delta - Argentina
« Reply #3 on: September 29, 2011, 08:38:54 pm »

The dark deep shaded area just above the ground is almost black and detracts from the beautiful upward flow of the image. Particularly because it goes from light area to a dark area of almsot no interest or detail. At the same time, I think if the trees were not so dark in the front, the image would be better. Sort of like adding fill light to the scene. But maybe bracketing would achieve a better result. These extremes are almost unavoidable in a scene like this. But keep at it because the composition is good and the feeling of exhuberance between the sun and the trees is definetely there.

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Re: Árboles del Delta - Argentina
« Reply #4 on: September 30, 2011, 01:17:21 pm »

John covered the topic pretty well. There is detail in the darker areas so perhaps a linear dodge or screen applied with a gradient filter would recover the darker areas without making an impact on the top part of the image.

I like the image.
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