I think this image has potential, and although it reminds me of other similar subjects that occur frequently, I like large parts of the capture.
But there is something about the tonality that is just a bit too much to my taste, leaning ever so slightly towards what I consider the dramatic and over-saturated artificial look favored in "HDR".
I suggest toning down the vibrance or saturation a tad, and perhaps leave out the dramatic sky and the very bottom of the image.
I do not understand why the edges of the image are fuzzy near the white border, it does not appear to match the subject well.
This may not be quite what you were looking for, but it is a one-minute approximation of what I think could be done to improve the image slightly.