Absolutely beautiful capture!
Only thing I’d play with, and I don’t know if I’d keep it, and of course I can’t know if you tried and rejected, but maybe try a gradient in the bright top center area to reduce brightness a tad – I'm guessing about 5% to 20% or so. It draws my eyes from the remainder of the scene.
But that said, I've been in a number of club houses and I can’t think of one that wouldn’t love to have something such as what you’ve done on display.
BTW, how does it look in color?