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sailronin

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Dead roses
« on: August 01, 2011, 05:49:10 PM »



HB 501CM w/80mm Planar and 55 & 21mm extension tubes on Kodak Portra 400
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Re: Dead roses
« Reply #1 on: August 02, 2011, 01:28:14 PM »

This is a beautiful take on a classic subject. The textures and detail are delightful.

I want to get lost in the intricate textures and colors, and mostly do, but the strong light in the upper left pulls my eyes away. Were I to play with it, I'd try darkening that area or maybe cloning something.

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Re: Dead roses
« Reply #2 on: August 02, 2011, 02:05:29 PM »

This is a beautiful take on a classic subject. The textures and detail are delightful.

I want to get lost in the intricate textures and colors, and mostly do, but the strong light in the upper left pulls my eyes away. Were I to play with it, I'd try darkening that area or maybe cloning something.

Same problem... the bright area is very distracting. The image would be gorgeous without itů
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