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Roberto Frieri

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Father and son
« on: July 13, 2011, 03:44:40 pm »

M8 + Tele-Tessar 4/85
Editing in Capture One

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Re: Father and son
« Reply #1 on: July 13, 2011, 03:49:11 pm »

I think I would have liked to see a better connection between them both, the expression of the Father to the Son, the composition that includes the dark pole is rather a distraction, the editing is very good considering the harsh lighting.

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Rob C

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Re: Father and son
« Reply #2 on: July 13, 2011, 05:08:17 pm »

Beautiful picture; the pole gives it spacial reference and the tonality looks like the best wet processing. Be proud.

One criticism? Get rid of that tiny white spot on the child's lip - it distracts me.

Rob C
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Re: Father and son
« Reply #3 on: July 13, 2011, 06:57:11 pm »

I'd like it better if the kid's face wasn't entirely in shadow.
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Rob C

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Re: Father and son
« Reply #4 on: July 14, 2011, 12:32:10 pm »

I'd like it better if the kid's face wasn't entirely in shadow.



But it's not; and that's exactly why the tonality looks so great: you get depth and range of visual/emotional response.

And that white spot still bugs me.

Rob C
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