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Roberto Frieri

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Waiting for the boat race
« on: May 26, 2011, 05:50:37 AM »

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Christoph C. Feldhaim

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Re: Waiting for the boat race
« Reply #1 on: May 26, 2011, 06:04:43 AM »

#1: Doesn't work for me. Will the boat bump against the pillar?
#2: Could be good, but need space on the left side.
#3: For me the most interesting shot. Looks a bit like a riddle, a hidden message I don't understand.
I keep myself asking whats the relation between the couple, the boat and the tree and the mountain.
#4: I am biased here -  I used to sail a lot of Laser and love that boat - so I like it.

Overall - I would reduce the vignetting.
If you need a frame in the image - a border to the outside,
it should be the composition, which keeps the image together.
« Last Edit: May 26, 2011, 06:06:42 AM by Christoph C. Feldhaim »
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Re: Waiting for the boat race
« Reply #2 on: May 26, 2011, 06:09:22 AM »

I have always been a sucker for the "lone tree" shot, so I am immediately drawn to number three. I am not sure about that triangle of land on the left though, nevertheless, it is a picture that I think is good.

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Re: Waiting for the boat race
« Reply #3 on: May 27, 2011, 02:41:35 PM »

Thank you Christoph and W.Walker for your comments.
Then other shots...

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Re: Waiting for the boat race
« Reply #4 on: May 27, 2011, 04:55:11 PM »

In the first set, the "lone tree" one speaks to me the most strongly, and in the newer set, the first one.

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Re: Waiting for the boat race
« Reply #5 on: May 28, 2011, 03:09:53 PM »

The lone tree shot is just amazing. I like all of the shots, but that one just stands out.

What kind of processing have done? I like how the mountains in the background fade away.
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Re: Waiting for the boat race
« Reply #6 on: May 28, 2011, 04:22:19 PM »

Thank you Eric and tq-g.

What kind of processing have done? I like how the mountains in the background fade away.

Well, it was a foggy day...
Black and white conversion using Capture One 6 and 2 stops vignette effect.
Sorry for my poor english.
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