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jasonrandolph
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January 24, 2011, 04:15:42 pm »
Here's a recent shot from a walk around downtown. What do you all think?
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January 24, 2011, 04:56:53 pm »
Nice composition, but I think I'd prefer it in B&W rather than the cross-processed palette you've employed here. The fence switching back in the background bokeh sustains the interest.
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January 25, 2011, 10:27:00 am »
Thanks C. I've actually been working on a B&W version, although I'm still tweaking it...
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January 25, 2011, 10:41:21 am »
Jason
The B/W is working much better for me. Nice composition / framing. The only little niggle I have is the
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shallow DOF, probably unavoidable I expect. But your focus point is spot-on, of course.
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January 25, 2011, 02:45:36 pm »
For me the B&W version has a good bit of appeal, which the color one doesn't. I think the colors distracted from the nice forms and patterns.
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January 25, 2011, 03:53:01 pm »
Interesting comments, as I find the color image striking and the b+w version very flat. The cross-processed look actually works for this image.
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January 25, 2011, 05:14:54 pm »
+1 for the B&W version.
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jasonrandolph
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January 26, 2011, 10:27:33 am »
Thank you all for your feedback. I always appreciate hearing the perspectives of others.
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January 26, 2011, 02:11:48 pm »
I agree. The lomo effect works for some images, but I think the B&W is better here.
Mike.
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