I have just visited your site. Overall, it is an impressive body of work. You have an eye for making the ordinary look unusal and worth reexamining. I note that within your "street" work, there is much abstract, and play of shapes and colours. I particularly enjoyed your motion images. I really liked the one of the girl with the umbrella, soft and surreal, and so feminine. The other that caught my eye, is the boy with large eyes looking up, way up, as the long legs running down clearly implied. It showed the relationship of a boy to an adult, and that he was vulnerable and looking for attention. Very impressive.
And by the way, I would not alter you image at all. It has spontaneity and impact, combined with rich play of shadow and light.