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toffer79

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Zimbabwe
« on: August 27, 2010, 09:56:07 am »

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Mugabe, well...



Confused.co.zw




Comments appreciated.

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shutterpup

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Re: Zimbabwe
« Reply #1 on: August 27, 2010, 10:43:26 am »

With #1, my eye is really distracted by the out of focus background dancers. Maybe a different angle and greater depth of field to get them all in focus, or a much shallower depth of field to emphasize the front dancer and de-emphasize the ones in back?

Love the eyes on #3.
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Dick Roadnight

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Re: Zimbabwe
« Reply #2 on: August 27, 2010, 10:45:42 am »

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I do not like the composition, blue cast
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Mugabe, well... and Confused.co.zw
You caught the expressions nicely, bot I do not like the cropping/composition/orientation

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Re: Zimbabwe
« Reply #3 on: August 27, 2010, 11:14:34 am »

I like the first image.. Nice.
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Re: Zimbabwe
« Reply #4 on: August 27, 2010, 11:16:38 am »

I like the first one except for the bit of blue in it.  Doesn't seem to fit the palette of the image.
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toffer79

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Re: Zimbabwe
« Reply #5 on: September 03, 2010, 08:25:59 am »

Kinda new to the critique side of things but (now) fully agree on the blue cast in the top pic.

Composition is maybe a little more of a personal taste issue but many thanks for all the comments.
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