It’s a nice abstraction.
I'm torn as I like the colors and textures but feel it wants to be tarted up a bit, potentially in either of a couple of different ways. Also at top almost center there is a spot of green in the middle of a delicious wave of yellow that draws my eye so strongly it distracts from the image. It also wants for a bit more DOF. Last, on the point of one way to tart it up a bit is that kind of composition begs to be done as Orton effect.