Yes, considering your points, I'd say that different solutions leads to different lands.
I admit that my crop idea is based on to something that has to do with abstract more than street.
I've been influenced by this natural tendency on me.
It's interesting to see your points. In terms of pure photography, involving a "story told", Russ and Eric are right and the image works perfectly as it is.
At the end, it is always a matter of choice. But interesting to see how different things works.
Now I've been watching the pic with distance, and I think it is just right.
Ps: it is not the first time I have a different feeling between the first impression when I see a picture, and the second reading after a while.
I think from now, I'll give my point of view in this section after the second viewing.
Cheers,
Fred.