Topic: still life/bags of coffee (Read 1450 times)

mokenny · « **on:** March 18, 2010, 01:12:46 am »

Picture taken in a wholesale coffee shop with GF1
C&C

Kenny

Justan · « **Reply #1 on:** March 18, 2010, 11:43:44 am »

I like it for the most part. The textures on the bags is delicious.

My critical comment is that the the background doesn’t work well for me. While it gives context, it also distracts. Perhaps a blur on the background would solve it.

RSL · « **Reply #2 on:** March 18, 2010, 12:37:33 pm »

I agree with Justan. Looks to me as if a fire engine or something is parked back there.

jasonrandolph · « **Reply #3 on:** March 19, 2010, 11:55:30 am »

I also think a shallower DOF would've worked better. However, I think you captured some excellent light, and as Justan said, the textures are excellent!

Christoph C. Feldhaim · « **Reply #4 on:** March 31, 2010, 10:31:00 am »

Quote from: jasonrandolph

I also think a shallower DOF would've worked better. However, I think you captured some excellent light, and as Justan said, the textures are excellent!

+1

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