I like the image's potential, but don't think this reaches it. The problem is, it's difficult to read with that bright stonework (or whatever it is) behind the figure. Brightness makes an area come forward, and this is so bright, that it does exactly that; at the same time, the dark figure (darkness causes subjects to recede) is obviously in front of the bright area. It's this immediate visual confusion that makes the photo difficult to read -- in fact, I have a hard time really looking at it. The photo would be better if the stonework were taken down a couple of levels, IMHO.