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ArunGaur

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« on: January 19, 2010, 10:32:04 pm »

One of my nine images in the series on the Fine Women of Rajasthan.

Excuse small size and big sign.

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« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2010, 11:19:17 pm »

I like the lines and colors.  Did you mean to include the fabric to the far right?  I'm not sure that it adds to the image.

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« Reply #2 on: January 20, 2010, 08:57:12 pm »

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I like the lines and colors.  Did you mean to include the fabric to the far right?  I'm not sure that it adds to the image.

John

John. Thanks for evaluation. I like blank spaces.
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« Reply #3 on: January 20, 2010, 09:48:04 pm »

I find this one simple and elegant. I think the colours and the space on the right are good balance and helps to focus on the arm and its pendants. Your copyright is very distracting, particularly in a small image.

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« Reply #4 on: January 21, 2010, 02:40:02 am »

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I find this one simple and elegant. I think the colours and the space on the right are good balance and helps to focus on the arm and its pendants. Your copyright is very distracting, particularly in a small image.

JMR

Thanks for believing in simplicity.
I would try to rectify the faults.

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