Since you are asking for commentary, I think it is rather busy and jumbled. The sumac, to me is an elegant tree with its fir-like leaves and fine-haired branches. Hard to convey. You will note the small white areas of out of focus areas, they are distracting. I almost always try to avoid shots where light peeks through trees as small circles of white, unless it is intended that way. The BW treatment does not appear to work either. Hope I was not too harsh. I have been there too.