Topic: grinding mill (Read 1687 times)

mokenny · « **on:** December 25, 2009, 12:59:58 am »

Picture taken with Panasonic Lumix gf1, 14-45 mm kit. b&w conversion with bw styler.
comments welcome as to how to improve the picture
Mokenny

jasonrandolph · « **Reply #1 on:** December 29, 2009, 10:41:21 am »

I think it's a great still life. Vignetting gives it a feeling of nostalgia. I don't think I would change a thing. Nice job.

John R · « **Reply #2 on:** December 29, 2009, 10:57:13 am »

Quote from: jasonrandolph

I think it's a great still life. Vignetting gives it a feeling of nostalgia. I don't think I would change a thing. Nice job.

I agree, the gradual transition from areas of light to dark is wonderful.

JMR

francois · « **Reply #3 on:** December 29, 2009, 11:15:30 am »

Absolutely wonderful!
Did you shoot it with a square aspect ratio or did you crop it later?

PeterAit · « **Reply #4 on:** December 29, 2009, 11:23:13 am »

Quote from: mokenny

Picture taken with Panasonic Lumix gf1, 14-45 mm kit. b&w conversion with bw styler.
comments welcome as to how to improve the picture
Mokenny

I think this is very well done, it has a lovely tonal range. The only changes I can suggest is to crop out a bit at the bottom to show the entire wheel (if possible), and crop in at the left to hide the stick. I can't tell if those would really be improvements without trying.

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