thank you for the feedback everyone. I agree that there is a bit missing from the third picture, but in a way I'm happy you describe it as "static," because that's what I was going for. I had a few shots of the monk on the doorsteps and in this one he had paused for a few seconds, maybe to contemplate something, and I thought that was best depicted by lack of blur, his foot positions and a slight blue overtone. I'll post a couple variations here once I get a chance to post-process them, maybe they're better
I appreciate all the advice
Ish